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for The Makeover - COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person Anon
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sneaky bastard. I love him. :)
person fig
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes hes breaking down, some sharring sex? could be a new thing for severus and hot!
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter! Mwhahaha, the next should be very interesting. :D
person DJ
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay - enough already! Let Hermione have a good night's sleep. I'm certainly not!
person Kelleys Sweetpea
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Severus is an asshole, he really needs to suffer now. Please let him get caught in his own trap and look like a whimp. He is being a monster!!!
person Anon
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione!!

I can't wait to read more.
person Queeny
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione!!!! Severus is so evil!
person Queeny
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I still feel bad for Hermione. And the whole kicking the ex death eater in the head made me happy. :)
person Jade
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Extreamly well written. Kudos! I love your story so far, as well as your other works.
person luce
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh No! Poor Hermione! The mean part of me wants Severus to suffer the same fate as Miles and Giorgio, but that would be too, too horrible for Hermione. Can't wait to see how it all plays out...