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for The Makeover - COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved it!!!! i couldnt stop reading it from start to finish. Great job
person Sooz
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Had to review midway...this is so great seeing Adam and Victor again. You really have something with those two characters. Almost like Jay and Silent Bob had a baby with The Bird Cage. LOL. Seriously though, you should take them out of fanfiction and give them their own story. You have talent to be original. Thanks for all of the fun reads you have given me...now go give Adam and Victor to an unsuspecting world. ;) Hugs, Susan
person Chavela
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 43~

That was lovely. Yummy Severus. And so thoughtful to go and get her potions in the middle of night.
person Chavela
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 45~

Gah! Severus, making a deal with Adam. What he woudn't do for Hermione. That was great. And Adam is so sneaky it is wonderful!
person Chavela
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* So sad to see it go. That was one great ending! I loved it so much! But damn I say that about all of your stories, LOL! This was awesome though!
person Chavela
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 27!

Can not keep this smile down. Severus, sinds any means to get what he wants. He'll even listen to her bitch just to get a look. That is hilarious. *howls*
person Chavela
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 31~

*pants* Gods... that was so hot.
person Chavela
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chaper 41~

*howls*
OMG! Severus is so funny, all that playfulness is cute, I think it is cool that he is letting Hermione be so playful. I love it.
person Chavela
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 42

*melts*
person Chavela
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Prologue!

LOL! This is going to be fantastic, I can tell, with Adam and Victor, how could it not be?!

*loves*