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for The Makeover - COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person KelleysSweetpea
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh will it be fun if Hermione finds out what Severus did. He needs to suffer a bit too and be forced to admit he wants her so much he is acting crazy. He also needs to be forced to compete with others on a level playing field. He is the one that made what they had a one night stand and now he is acting like a big baby.
person Lexy Malfoy
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay so I've been reading this story for the past 12 chappies straight and thought I'd actually review now. *grins sheepishly* sorry bout that. Anyways I love this fic and what you've done with it so far. It's really great and is it wrong for me to say that I'm really liking Justice's character?
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn! I cannot wait for the next chapter, this chapter was even better than excellent! :D
person Lexy
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG...poor hermione. Please update.
person luce
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love your work. Keep 'em comin', Ms Figg!
I hope this plan backfires on Severus, but maybe I'm just nasty....
;-)
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter again! Mwhaha, Severus is great.
person Anon
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting! :) I'm loving this fic!
person Queen Celestia
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww poor Hermione!
person Queen Celestia
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Severus in a beauty shop. xD It would have been amusing if he had got a hair treatment as well [ you know the whole misunderstanding type and the end statement of "I just came here to pick up shampoo" line]
:) Update soon .
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Hmm, I wonder when Hermione will find out. Hehe, Wonderful!