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November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DROOL...
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was the most hilariously disturbing thing I have ever read. Great job!
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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was so much fun, loved all of it.
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was pretty good for the type of story it was. I would have liked to have seen more of the characters involved in sex acts, so perhaps you'll add a chapter going into more detail. I'm looking forward to more.
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was great and i always thought that fred and george would have a foot fetish a bit creepy to some point but great none the less
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked it and I really really want more! you could so turn this into something really cool!!!!!!
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
umm..no offense but that was pretty much impossible to read. Forone..even putting aff.net on the smallest font there is...there was still side scrolling which is really hte most annoyng thing when reading a story. There is pretty much no character development...aside from naming hte characters..you really have no way of telling who is speaking or doing anything..you need to give them personalities. I hope you don't get angry..because you should take critisism to heart and learn from your mistakes..it will make you a better writer.