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for Harry and his witches

by darkwave390

person reviewer
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, if you're planning to go in the horcrux direction, 'I vote no' so they can all be together and hunt for those things.
person shadowmoon
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice fic.but blaize zambini is a
person shadowmoon
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well,i dont see in ur story y harry will go walk happy to hog., its a little weird, but susan can bc its more easy...i have some idea, harry can have somme help whit Severus snape and remus lupin and each of the 2 get somme girl 2.i dont like to see harry whit a big harem of 30female or more? i have somme idea whit the female for the 3^^
person shadowmoon
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
1 of my idea^^ for the new girl:P
for harry(16Y.O.)= Katie Bell-Alicia Spinett-Angelina Jhonson-Daphn
person shadowmoon
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sorry for Blaise Zamb. its not for ur fic:C
person Anon
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked what Harry did to Rudolphus & Draco. I believe Harry & Susan should go back to Hogwarts. And that the girls should go with them.
person Experience My Dreams
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it!! It's different!!! Can't wait for another update!!!
person DG
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a rather...confusing chapter.
Or maybe it was just me ^^
Anyway, it had rather good ideas, especially the Veela orgies
Never seen that done before.
Looking forward to next chapter, update soon
person DG
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Let Fleur stay with Harry, even against Bill's beliefs.
You can play it off by stating Veelas are much more open and accepting
of everything related ti sex.
Good chapter btw
person Kratos
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First you have a great start to a story here I hope you keep with it. Second good luck with the wedding. Third I hope to see more updates soon.
bye.