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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You duplicated a chapter (9 & 10 are the same). FYI.
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your repeated the same chapter twice but beyond that its preety awesome and by that I mean its....OMG ITS SOOOO GREAT I LOVE IT AND CANT WAIT I LOVE YOUUUUUUUU!!! thats all I am trying to say....thanks my email is Ladybug452000@Gmail.com feel free to rant and rave or whatever
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If you're going to kill of Hermione, you should at least have Harry fuck her first, and probably involve Ginny in some way. Also, what about the Patil sisters. They would be interesting to play around with. You could even have Harry send them to India for recruits or somthing.
Anyways, its a good story. Keep it up.
Anyways, its a good story. Keep it up.
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cant wait for more
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i want harry to save lisa turnpin make her his slave oh and have harry save terry boot of ravenclaw
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Veela not Vella
Gabrielle is feminine way of spelling and the way it was in the book
I also think you meant permanent
Interesting story though, please continue
Gabrielle is feminine way of spelling and the way it was in the book
I also think you meant permanent
Interesting story though, please continue
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First thanks for making the chapters longer. Next I love this chapter. I love the fight reading about those 3 getting hammered was great and the part where Ginny came in and join the right side (the Harry & Ginny paring was always one on my favorites). Anyway a dam fine job I look forward to the next one. Bye & thanks.
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have read stories like this before and I rank this as one of my favorite.
What I like about this story is that Harry has a purpose, you are not letting him get away with being drunk on power and things seem to be going well for him.
I know that most of the Weasely's are behind harry, but maybe room for one more? Not that nothing sexual has to happen, but I would like to see Mrs. Weasely going over to his side as a mother.
What I like about this story is that Harry has a purpose, you are not letting him get away with being drunk on power and things seem to be going well for him.
I know that most of the Weasely's are behind harry, but maybe room for one more? Not that nothing sexual has to happen, but I would like to see Mrs. Weasely going over to his side as a mother.
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Like it good story line can u please make the chapters a little longer and how about some dark art training