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for Harry and his witches

by darkwave390

person unknown
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Make the brotherhood good and have Chocolate pair up with Harry, and from the save list add Katie, Patils, Daphne, Hannah, and Luna.
person MADness
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think you should make the Dark Brotherhood, be evil so that Harry and Chocolate can pit their powers of seduction against each other.
person Cerberus
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Have the Dark Brotherhood be a mix of dark and light a Shadow Brotherhood, like the Yin and Yang simbol. And have them join Harry. If so maybe you can make a Harry x Chocolate Lemon scene or even a Threesome whit Tonks :D

On the save list have: Katie Bell + Daphne Greengrass + Lisa Turpin + The Patil Twins (maybe even Hannah Abbot). The other can be killed for all I care.

Hope you update soon.
Ja ne!
person Cerberus
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Have the Dark Brotherhood be a mix of dark and light a Shadow Brotherhood, like the Yin and Yang simbol. And have them join Harry. If so maybe you can make a Harry x Chocolate Lemon scene or even a Threesome whit Tonks :D

On the save list have: Katie Bell + Daphne Greengrass + Lisa Turpin + The Patil Twins (maybe even Hannah Abbot). The other can be killed for all I care.

Hope you update soon.
Ja ne!
person Cerberus
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
P.S.: Sorry for the double post, my internet connection dropped for second and I wasn't sure it posted the first time.
person kratos
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
another good chapter as to which girls Harry should get from the list Katie and Hannah would be my choices and maybe Neville could get a girl too. THanks and bye.
person Melissa
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love the story please continue
person dennis
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story so far, can't wait for it to be updated
person NN
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If you bring Luna into the mix it would give Hary and co a in with Ravenclaw.
person Lady Lynn
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So, I just read what you have of this story so far and I must say that I like it a lot. Umm so I've really got no one for you to save since you brought Neville into the fold. I vote for the dark brethren or whatever you call them (im tired and will be going to bed shortly, sorry that my memory sucks) to join harry. so yeah. Have a wonderful day.