rate_review Reviews

oh my god

I've just found your story and I like it a lot,except how you have portrayed hermione I know you said that you don't like her but I have a better suggestion on how to make her better,Bind her to harry as a slave but bind her with a over powered kiss to where it's strong enough to completely overpower her,and make her spy on dumbledore think about it who would think of her as a spy and your probably wondering how they would kiss in the first place easy dumbledore sets it up as hermione switching sides so that she'll spy for him not knowing that it's the other way around and harry can feed dumbledore any story that he wants and harry can practice with hermione like the side effect of over powering the kiss is that she needs intimate contact with harry like every three to four days, now for fred and george they are still needed so if they were hurt the elves would take them to another property insted of st. mungos and thats why they couldn't contact harry.

I would like Fred & George to survive. I like the story.

Great story please keep writing. Also don't kill the twins . Kill Ron instead. have hary rescue the twins and turn hermonie in to a double agent then kill her off later.

Also Congratulations on the wedding

gut the fucking death eaters no one messes with fred and george

Id say harry/ginny/tonks, just imagine how useful Metamorph abilities could be in the bedroom, and yes, nevah kill fred and george, if anything, id truly love to see the twins pull somthing that'll have me cracking up laughing for hours. As predictable as they are, theyd be able to manage it.

hi!! im new on this story, but i really love it!!! i like the way you

A fun pairing. i like how your trying to keep the number of harry's lovers to a reasonable number. still its AFF and whatever floats your boat lol. I look forward to future chapters and more of narcissa and tonks

this is an awesome story i can't wait for the next installment. send me a note when you posted the next chapter here please

well I got to tell you I realy have enjoyed this story so far, I'm curious how you will resolve any further hogwarts happenings.

my feelings about the brotherhood is that it would be nice to have them cooperate with harry, even with the group you want to form it's mostly school going children so I think the adition of this brotherhood would be nice.

possibly some link between his title black <-> darkness

good luck!
an anxious fan ^^