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March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i would think the reason you would like jones IS because very little is known about her so you can do as you please with her and no one will thing it is OOC.
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December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, and the plot thickens. I'd offer my survices as beta, but I wouldn't be of much help with the canon stuff. This Mewtwo wishes to see the next chapter up soon.
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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
in other words, you're selling your soul... didn't you just say you were engaged?
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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must say, the sex has not been impressive
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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
finally, some sex
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January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what happened to Tonks?
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January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story makes no F'n sense
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice premise, but the first chapter seems to meshed together
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November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loving the story so far, please update soon
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Although the storyline is interesting, the spelling, grammar, punctuation, etc., detract from the enjoyment of the story. Also, Parts 14 & 15 are identical. You need a good editor to correct the aforementioned errors and repost the entire story (and complete it as well). You've got a good start, but attention to details can make it great.