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for Beg Me To Stay

by freakenbree

person purrfus
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Anticipation makes the climax sweeter!
person Hambares
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I almost cried with Harry after his vision ofthe little one's torture. But you are forgiven since Severus decided to stop torturing Harry and start loving him!
person Paula
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i just wanted to say that i was twisting my toes when i was reading the third chapter. sigh sigh

it was well written and the final touch (I love you brat) was breathtaking. :)
person Sophia
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A very wonderful chapter. I love all the emotion Harry is feeling and how emotional Severus got in the chapter. I really can't wait to see what happens next. I really look forward to it. Keep up the very magnificent work.
person vampchic
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, loving this story. I'm so looking forward to the updates.
person Kay
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really interesting, & I like your long chapters!! update SOON!
person OzGirl
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is an amazing story and i hope that ayou update soon.
keep up the good work.
btw, woulf it be possible for you to email me when the next chapter(s) come out????
person Melissa
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love your story the fisrt one in a while on adultfanfiction that has cought my attention. I really hope you update soon cant wait to see what happens ^_^
person Hambares
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Apprentice? That is great news. Now Harry can be so close to Severus!
person Paula
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...uau

great story!! it's only the beginning, but the plot seems interesting. the descriptions are well done and you don't rush things. Although the suspense is killing me, it's what makes a great story. i hope you can continue with the work.

may the muse be with you -_-