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for To Have and To Keep

by MontanaDan

person Ari
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am ecstatic that you wrote a second chapter. Keep at it.
person Kateri
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH very interesting chapter, lots of great stuff going on, not to mention a bit of mystery and danger
person Echo
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another fun chapter. We still haven't found out yet if Dumbledore is trying to interfere with Harry and Severus's relation. Is Bill going to join the suitor pack? And that Montgomery guy seems very suspicious. Please update soon.
person Squall-sama
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*falls to my knees* Oh, I love you! You are god for continueing! *kisses your feet reverently* Is Harry preggers?! And uh, who was Montgomery again? I can't remember--it's been so damn long since I read the beginning of this series--and even the end of the second one. >.< You post too slow! But you post nice long chappies, so I guess I can suffer... *sighs dramatically*
person MARIA JOAO
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank god you're continuing the sequel...I've been waiting for awhile...but here it is :D...please update as soon as possible
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, the fate worse than death... calling Dobby... I really enjoy this set of stories and hope you keep up the writing!
person maria joao
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MY GOD...I just found today that you has a sequel of 'To have and to hold' (I love that fic.. i DON'T KOW HOW MANY TIMES i'VE READ IT, i JUST LOVE IT...) THANK U SO MUCH.. please continue this one ...I'm waiting :D.. continue with your wonderful work :D
person acr
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww....and I LIKED grant! He seemed nice!Great chaptr.
person Vallon
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes!! This briliant series continues! I have been waiting for ages for this! So, Harry now has Severus and Lucius after his affections. And a strange stalker/friend/evil person after him as well. Can't wait till the next chapter. I will be reviewing everyone so beware... mwahahaha!
person Bookworm51485
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Naughty naughty Harry, he shouldn't be getting drunk while he's pregnant. Or maybe he doesn't remember. Somehow it doesn't come across that he even realizes, or remembers, about the potion that Lucius slipped him. Oh well, I guess it'll come up eventually:)

I like your beginning so far, with Lucius and Severus gearing up to fight to win Harry back. And now another guy, hmmmmm..... I cna't wait until you update again.