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for To Have and To Keep

by MontanaDan

person cravedom
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are back! I have enjoyed this series from the beginning and feared it was abandoned. Instead of just reading the recap I went back and read the whole thing and do have to say that it was as enjoyable as the first time. Your characters are well rounded; nobody is too evil or too good. I hope you continue this story. cravedom@yahoo.com
person alma
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you updated.
person antipyro
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! It's so special that Severus and Harry got back together again. Too bad Harry isn't ready to deal with it just yet. I hope he sheds this excess baggage and realizes what's best for him. Great writing - as always. Thanks for the notification.
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please keep me posted when you update at poohnation74@yahoo.com, thank you
person Faschmer
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is bloody brilliant, but I feel kind of bad for Lucius though... I hope he hooks up with someone, so that he can get over Harry. Maybe Bill??? Poor Harry, he never gets a break, and Severus who don't understand when to back of. Snape is soo cute in this story ^^
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice work although slightly confusing. Please update soon.
person Darkless
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Angsty!! Oh Yeah... *sigh* More please. Thank you.
person Jicky
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg it took me all weekend, but very worth it XP i read from the beginning all the way from "To Have and To Hold" then "To Have Not". i think Lucius is just a tad obsessed, no? (you think!?) lol =P i like how u wrote Harry and Sev. it's very realistic and just so enjoyable to read. oh i think Bill is quite true to character as well. thou i dun think i like Grant (was it?) he's too flirty touchy. LOL (ps. the ending of 1st ch, he has to pay? i'm confused. pay as in evil kill-you way or sneaky molest-you kinda way?) it's quite sad that Harry lost the babies, but it's nice to know that there's true feelings and love btwn him n Severus. i understand where Sev's comin from, with the whole "set him free" thing, but gosh just makes me wana smack him a few times XD i wish Harry would be recuperating in Severus' rooms @ Hogwarts. but since he escaped, maybe Sev could still get into his home, despite or exactly cuz of the the blood wards. oh i also like Remus and Sirius both alive and well. they're quite true to character as well, and fun to read. it's also nice to read some Draco.
ok babbled enuf, all in all i really like this story. keep it going, i look forward for the rest.
person Rayne11
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg!!! How could you leave it at thaaaat! Please update again sooon! We've waited so long for this chapter (thnks btw!). omgomgomgomg I really like you series. Poor Harry.....and Sev D:

Sorry if this review doesn't make too much sense >.<
person Kelly Zuerlein
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just thought I would let you know I really enjoyed both the finished stories alot and this one looks like it is going to be just as good. Gee if Harry was to try and have sex with grant would the man be balless by any chance. K.