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for To Have and To Keep

by MontanaDan

schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just wondering if you're gonna write more? Like the story... K
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is great! please email me with updates at flclanimefanatic@yahoo.com, thanks!
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Harry is understandable in his mistrust of Severus and also frustrating because we know Severus doesn't want to hurt him again and loves him. And then Grant and Lucius get added to the mix and it gets a lot more frustrating! I'm sure you'll write us some hot snarry sex to make up for it though, right? :)

I'm glad you updated, and I'll be watching for more! Thanks and keep up the great writing!
person alma
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.
person xikum
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaggggkkkk!!!! Haaaaarryy! Sigh. Just as he seems close to reconciling with Snape, he does something odd again. Well, at least he's changing into his Animagus, instead of accidentally hurting himself, but what is that about now, anyway? ANd this Grant... seems to have changed from soneone who was out to hurt Harry, to someone who is stalking him, quite literally. Though, maybe just some more Slytherin-style courtship? Getting interesting ina good way now, not just only angsty, I like interesting! And, oh, my yes - the sex was hot and so, so good. Please more soon?
person xikum
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why do I keep thinking 'Polyjuice' whenever Montague/Montgomery is mentioned? Hmmm... And now, with the pain not occurring when Harry is with Severus, but occurring whenever he is touching others in a sexual/sensural way - makes me think of some type of bond? But, then, why would Dark Magic help it - and this time, the cursed frame seems to have worked differently than Dark magic had in the past? And too, wonder to whom that other woman (the quasi-witch shop assistant) was referring? And so, so glad that at least part of the time, Harry seems to finally be beginning to buy a clue. Unfortunately, he appears to need to buy a bushel of clues. Hmmm.... so very much to consider here! Love it all to bits, and eagerly awaiting anymore that may come!
person alma
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!! you updated. Good chapter.
person genna
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good Story.

I'd prefer it if Lucius didn't get hurt, Harry takes the Status Quo spell off the antique shop, Grant is NOT Zabini, and Snape is the one who is pregnant this time.

Either way you do it, it is rich well woven tale.
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so happy your back
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Twist one ankle behind me and look cute*

Montana, I have a quick question? Why torture Lucius so much? Doesn't he deserve happiness too?