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person melusinesara
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
a wonderfully enjoyable read! thanks for not giving up on this story :)
person Ms_Figg
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mel: Sorry I forgot how to spell your name that quick when posting this. This story was already completed. I was just uploading it...and griping a bit. lol. Artistic tantrum. The moment someone said they wanted to finish it...I couldn't refuse to put the rest up. Glad you enjoyed it.
person breastlady
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your story and really loved your ending. I was so hoping it would turn into a romance. I especially enjoyed the way Severus accepted his punishment and his philosophy when he was turned into a snake. I respected him more for taking what he had coming to him. What a Slytherin! Yummy! I really liked the way you kept both characters strong without losing face even as each gave into the other . Your lemons were extra yummy. Thank you very much for giving me such a good time.
person melusinesara
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
holy crap, that last chapter was hot. please, continue!
person Charlie13
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ms_Figg,
I really enjoy reading your stories. This one so far has done you proud.

WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!
person melusinesara
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sorry, i don't review fics much, but i do read them. and i don't really see any point in continuing reading this if its discontinued. which is a shame, as it was an interesting story. still, it ultimately the author's decision to write or not write. although as an author myself, i write regardless of reviews. oh well.
person anon
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please contiue i love this funny ass story! i am one of your biggest fans ( computer wont let me leave a review most of this time) email me please the rest of your story please i crave more of the this funny ass story! please!
person Moony
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
pease don't stop writing,i love this story
person angel
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great .. please please please please more .. later for now

angel