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person Queen Celestia
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
xDDDDDDDDD Severus you scallywag!!
person Queen Celestia
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah yeah Severus. Blah blah blah lets have sex Hermione blah blah blah stop being such a prude blah blah blah cementing relationship. blah blah. random sex and ---
I think my mind tuned out at Severus' speech. xDDD

Lol I'm such a devils advocate type of reviewer with you. Sorry. Kinda. >> Maybe. Perhaps.
person Queen Celestia
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dear Merlin someone needs to draw the whole Caveman Severus dragging Hermione into the cave while waving his mace threateningly to the other cave wizards. xDDDD
person Queen Celestia
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Little man in a boat" ? xDDD I was like "Whaaat?" when I read that. Haha.
person Queen Celestia
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lemons may be tart but you seem able to add enough sugar to make them satisfactory. :)
person Queen Celestia
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
K this last chapter you accidentally dumped the entire sugar contents onto the lemons. xDDD

But that's ok. :)
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person Queen Celestia
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay for Hermione for trying to bring the situation back to something more normal.
person Queen Celestia
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oo evil torture for the Professor!
person Queen Celestia
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It seems Hermione's torture of Snape didn't last long.