rate_review Reviews

I loved it, I've a few of your other stories and checked out 'The Burning Pen.' Unfortunately at this time I've fallen on a very tight budget, one of these days though I will get the money to check out your other work, I always love a good sexy story. And while I might not always review I will continue to read stories and probably love every last one. You do very good work, please keep it up, I enjoy reading very much and as of late you are the only author I'll be reading.
Sincerely,
Colleen

another thing i completely love about this story: how hermione and snape's and pervical and ginny's romance started out completely opposite. i kind of wish ginny and percival's romance could have weaved in with the story of snape and hermione. i can definitely relate to ginny. i would never just let someone just sweet talk me and fall for you. you would have to work for it!! i loved both couples in their own ways though. i truly enjoyed this story! it took up about 3 days of my life even when i went out of town i made sure i had a connection to the internet. amazing job!!

p.s. something i observed that i think can easily be fixed: when a person is talking especially in long paragraphs that are broken up you omit the quotation mark at the end of the first paragraph to show that in the next paragraph the same person is still talking. for example:

"blah blah blah...
...blahblahblahblahblah.

"blahblahblahblah
blahblahblahblahblahblah
blah."- this quotation mark signals the end of their little speech.

i hope that helps. it was just something that irked me.

OMGOSHHHH!!!!!! at first i was like he is so going to marry her again then i was like oh no i really don't think he is because he was seriously pushing her away then he slid the ring on her finger. OMGOSHHH!!!! i could cry right now. if i saw this in theatres i'd be an emotional wreck i tell you!! the romance in this story is so awesome and original. I LOVE IT!!!

hah an annulment of a divorce... do they really have that? still cool though!

i am entirely in love with how you have hermione and severus returning their feelings for each other once again. it is sooo romantic.

Awesome story! Loved every chapter, and just spent the better part of a day reading it in its entirety. I shall be on the look out for your next story Ms Figg!

Yes, Percy's return made my eyes leak. :)

Usually Ginny is the one who is all about makeup and lingerie. I like this Ginny.

I wondered how you were going to make this story last 45 chapters when they knocked off Voldy so quickly, but you did it admirably. An angsty beginning ended up with a delightful ending. Good story, start to finish!

Wow, I have never read this story and you have me hooked!