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person Sapphire
schedule July 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Are you no longer creating more Severus/Hermione stories? Or do I have to check your site, The Burning Pen? And aww, I want to read about the fallouts and the dramas of the abandon pregnant witches ...
schedule January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What a great story Figgy! As you know, I'm a fan of yours, but I haven't read all of your stories as yet. lol I take my time. This one -- well, I wasn't expecting it at all. As I tell you over and over again, you are so creative!

I love how you wrote Isadora in there. I don't think Isadora is a female Severus; Severus is a male Isadora :)

Also, I'm not biggest Remus Lupin fan. I must be the one person in Harry Potter fan land who isn't a fan of the werewolf. I don't know why, he just irritates me...except in the 3rd book, lol. But I like how you wrote him. Besides you, I think Snapes_Goddess has a great lease on Lupin as well. But that's about it. The only reason I can stand him is b/c of you two, so kudos for writing him so well.

On that note, I LOVE and I mean LOVE how you had your Severus come to Hermione's rescue when he found out she was pregnant. I have a cousin who was a deadbeat dad and he didn't marry the mother of his kid. Well, the kid is going to be 4 soon and my cousin is coming around, but still, while I love him because he's family, it really bothered me with that he did to the mother of his kid. I mean he wasn't around, he didn't want to be around and he was very mean to her. My other cousins and I, we tried to pick up the slack and we would take the little baby out, visit him etc. It was awful. Thank goodness it's better now.

Anyway, my point of telling you this is that reading that bit in your story made me very happy. I'm not saying that every couple that makes babies should be together, but I think it's important for people to remember it takes TWO people to make a baby -- and the baby didn't ask to be brought into this world. So I LOVE that you related that message (with a VERY HAPPY ending/notion) into your story.

Grest job!

Happy New Year Figgy! :)
person Jessica
schedule September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i couldn't adore this story anymore. :) it was amazing. i give it 2 thumbs up and 5 stars.
person Nemesis
schedule August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhh.... I LOVE this fic!!!! I just have to come back and re-read it every now and then...
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SHANIA TWAIN I LOVE HER.
person smmz79
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what a fabulous chap hermione is dead ok so i know she really is not but you wrote that so well and if i had read this story when you posted it one chap at a time i know i would have cried hell i am almost in tears now well done
person smmz79
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like this so far as i have said before i love the way you write hermione and severus esp severus... i laughed so hard when albus told severus to get laid omg that was great....
person LJAM
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well Figgs, well done as usual. I began reading this because I was hungrey for your stories....and since you haven't been continuing with Why Just Watch and Yuletide (HINT HINT) I decided to read something that was complete. This story was wonderful, I finished it in 3 days! I laughed alot, cried alot, and squirmed ALOT with those wonderful lemons. I just love Hermoine and Snape together. Snape is just perfect: you've taken a character and fleshed him out, and made him a delicious fantasy! I love everything about him...especially his snarkly nature. (Although I just love it as fantasy...when my husband tries it I bristle and would hex him in a minute if I could). Anyway, just want you to know that I love your work, envy you talent, and feel that you should be racking in the money when you get published.GO for IT GIRL! Linda
person Solomon
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The absolute BEST story do not change a thing I LOVE IT i would like to know if there are men hung like snape and if so please email me with details WHO WHERE When HOW can I get to him and if he is singel and Free
person Solomon
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHAT IS THE POINT TO THE STORY NOW Without her Love for him what is left?