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for Cape of storms

by DeityOfDeath

person Lioncourt
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow.
person The w00t Girl
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw, that is cute, the ending and glad to see that the two are back together, hope Harry improves and the same with their relationship.
person briar
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol theres a golds gym in my town too. ive never been there though. im too lazy to work out. i love this fic! you must write more!
person vyator
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing chapter, as always, loved it, it was so sweet at the end when Sev was taking care of him and staying with him
person Hambares
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good for you on the Pilates! What exactly is wrong with Harry? I hope they can cure it, but as they are still talking about not letting him die alone ... I don't know.
person Sophia
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now I truly can't wait to see what happens next. This was a wonderful chapter!! Keep up the magnificent work and I will try to wait as patiently as possible, lol.~Sophia
person sodapop0006
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This fic has a good plotline, with Harry/Sev and Harry's strange seizures, but you seem to skip around a lot in writing so it doesn't match up. At first, the seizures were holding Harry back from the Wizarding World and then suddenly he's a teacher at Hogwarts. And he had seizures maybe twice a week, but then he was well enough to teach classes everyday without any occurance. It seems like it could use more explanation as well as more conflict, but it's a good start.
person The w00t Girl
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! What is going on?! Damn you for the clif hanger! You better update soon! Tell us what happens!!!
person vampchic
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, you have got to update this! You have me sitting on the edge of my seat here! This is really good and I'm just dying to know what happens next. I really hope that this'll have a happy ending, but I think it would also be bitter sweet if Harry does end up dying at the end. Oh, please tell me the next update wont be so far off. This is a damn good fic.
person Isabel
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o.m.g....it was so good....now im dieing to now what happens.please email me when you have updated!