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for Staking Claims

by KCRae

person Amessis
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! But you have to update soon!
person Aoi-sama
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!\pleeeeeeaseeee, no evil cliffhanger!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
update pleease..... i'm ur devoted so hurry okay1
(puppy eyes)
ur doing just fine. i'll be looking foward to the next chap!!!!
person welcome_earthling
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh god!! I can't believe you left it like that!!! Cliffy indeed.

Loved Draco wanking! Very naughty, I'm sure he would be good at putting on a show for dear old Harry :)
person Yana
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
don't understand what
person cricket
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Hope you update soon!
person The w00t Girl
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the whole Draco wanking, along with Harry being bolder, good chapter and can't wait for the update. :D
person Anon
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mmm...yummy, can't wait for the next chapter
person Draven Wolfe
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*drools*
Gah, I loves this chappie! I enjoy the French input very much! XD Update soon, or I shall go mad!!!! *gonk*
person S.L.Q
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I love your story! Please continue soon! So, I do have one question, is Harry really Draco's mate or was he just a conveinent blood donor who woke Draco up when he was in the midst of blood lust? Love it!
person mikochan
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter but for the translation of french sentences, you've made some mistakes.

"You have the most beautiful eyes I have ever seen" = "Vous avez les plus magnifiques yeux que J'ai jamais vus".

"You know that when I hate you, it is because I love you to a point that unhinges my soul" = " Vous savez que quand je vous hais, c'est parceque je vous aime au point de d