rate_review Reviews

Nice story with a good premise. The only problem I had was in your description of Dumbledores' Sherbet Lemons, you described them as pastries, when in fact they are a hard boiled sweet or a bon-bon. However you could change them to be lemon tarts, which are a pastry. Well done and good luck with the rest of this story, I look forward to reading more. Fia.

Thank you for the start of a new, and very imaginative, so far, Hermione/Snape fic. Well done, keep up the good work.

Interesting, i can't wait for ze next chapter.
This intrigues me.
Fyi Dumbledores' Sherbet Lemonsare are NOT pastries, they are in fact hard boiled sweets.
Other then that, well done ^^

Hey, for English being your third language, you have done a good job thus far with this story, though there is a few minor spelling and grammar mistakes, but not that bad...many native speakers who post here sometimes make many more mistakes than you have done. Your story is interesting, not many people have written a Veela story about the SS/HG ship. I'd like to see what you have in store for the next chapter!

Great post, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.

interesting start. please continue I am interested in seeing how it will unfold

hmm a little werid but i like it.Sounds like a sexy snape tale.