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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
pls update!!!!!!!!!!:) i am straving for the chapters!!!!!
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good and interesting first chapter. Neville being a naked molerat is funny.
Your English is excellent, but you should get a beta to proofread for minor mistakes. "infact" should be "in fact", "whimp" should be "wimp", and Severus has many pints of blood in him, so a half pint of Veela blood would not be correct. Perhaps you should say half his genes instead?
Your English is excellent, but you should get a beta to proofread for minor mistakes. "infact" should be "in fact", "whimp" should be "wimp", and Severus has many pints of blood in him, so a half pint of Veela blood would not be correct. Perhaps you should say half his genes instead?
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I need more!!!! Pretty please?!!! This is great so far. I can't wait to see what all happens.
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interesting start I look forward to reading more
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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lets hope shes part cat shes gonna need those nine lives
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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOH! Update soon! Very interesting so far.
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August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Promising start I hope you keep going! :)
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August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Snape as a Veela? Sounds very interesting. I'm looking forward to see what will happen.
And what does Hermione see at the end of the chapter? Can't wait to find out. More please?!
And what does Hermione see at the end of the chapter? Can't wait to find out. More please?!