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for Serpent's Bite

by SilentSilhoutte

person Amber
schedule October 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this is really good I hope there is more soon and to your other one Three's a Crowd that one is awesome I like them both though
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks Yuki, it was a good story.
person Anon
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! I love this story. Possessive Snape is my favorite, but adding the Veela element makes it so much better.
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is an interesting read so far. i'm intrigued! LOL. please update soon! and could you by chance put me on an e-mail list for when you update? if you have one that is. :) keep it up!
person Tink-
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hermione would only be 17, not 18, for in the wizarding world, that's the age of consent.
Anyways. It's good so far, are you planning to update?
person Anon
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would love to review properly but I honestly don't feel there is much work with! But I will try...

Your first chapter was nice and the thought of Snape needing/having a mate is intriguing enough. That Dumbledore is subtly cautioning him regarding his prospects was a nice touch. Leave it to the Headmaster to know what's what :)

I'd really like to know what it was that Hermione saw and what is to transpire during her detention. Please update soon. It would be a shame to abandon a story after the first chapter, don't you think?
person Jade
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very goo, please update