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for Distorted Exposure

by IncessantDarkness29

person predatorintherye
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought this chapter was done well. Instead of trying to fix something that isn't broken you should start the next chapter. Okay that was my way of saying..UPDATE SOON!!
person Bobcat
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS SO GREAT, i love how you're bringing them together like this, i love it.
person punkin02
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh....Darn, a cliffie...I hope you update soon, I like this story alot. :)
person Kiwi
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Read all three chapters! I must say, this story is interesting! Especially now
with that cliff hanger you left us with. You can't possibly leave it like that!
Hope you update soon. =) Keep up the nice work. ^_^
person Alison
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nope! Grammar's fine. So long as you update soon!!!!! =o)
person BlueBlomst
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. My english is far below par, so I'm not exactly the right person to notice if the grammar is correct :) I hope you will update soon...
person nataliebug
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome! keep updating :]]
person Shardae
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's it you juss gonna stop writing there??? What happens?
person Wicabeth
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*cackles* Can't wait to see Harry and Draco give that four poster bed a workout XDD
person Anon
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
if it means you update faster, then yes, your grammers perfect honey never bother with a beta. This is going to be interesting..I can tell...they are SO going to play up the hated love thing in the shoots aren't they?...that smoldering angry look can be terribly sexy you know...I cant wait for more.