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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, you got Harry and Draco's personalities dead on, I didn't think at all they would forget their rivalry and suddenly just like each other. This is amazing I can't wait to see how this turns out!! =)
Ahhh, oh my gosh, the dominant partner? *_* That sounds exactly something Draco would say.. hehe, I wonder how Harry would react to that!
Ahhh, oh my gosh, the dominant partner? *_* That sounds exactly something Draco would say.. hehe, I wonder how Harry would react to that!
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I can't believe they agreed! (Well, I hoped, obviously) ;o)
Update soon please! I love this story!!!
Update soon please! I love this story!!!
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...I don't see anything wrong with this chapter. I don't think you should bother with changing it unless you need to add something that will be important later in the fic. but other than that it was pretty kick ass
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No need to nock this chapter. I found it quite good actually! Can't wait for more but take your time. Don't rush yourself on our account. Quality over quantity, luv.
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wonder whats gonna happen when they go to sleep???
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I can only imagine the reaction that will garner. Something along the lines of Harry: "Oh, HELL no." and maybe Ren: "Once again, are you the expert here? We had actually thought that Harry would be the dominant, what with your past work." Or something like that... but I'm a dom!Harry fan, so you could have actually been serious... oh, I hope not. Pleeeeease dom!Harry!!! Love the story,
~Hazel
~Hazel
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wonderful wonderfulness, eh? Hm, well, yeah, I liked this chap, lots of talking but, meh *shrugs* I like how you managed to keep Draco IC with his former school-self (something I always have problems with). The fight was good, "always the victim, never the villan" I loved that line!
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, please update soon! I can't wait until the *absolutely steamy* photo shoots and, hopefully, sex scenes!
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, dominant Draco
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved the story. Can't wait for the next chapter