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for Distorted Exposure

by IncessantDarkness29

person Elle
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh this story is wonderful! i love the sexual tension :DD
updating soon? i hope so! good luck! :)
person Dezra
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is not my cup of tea with Harry being so submissive and accepting already. But it's very well written.
person kumori
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i found my way to this story by mistake. and to my surprise i found i was easily hook on to it. so keep up the good work. and please update soon.


kumori
person rAiNwAtEr
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the direction your story is going in. It wonderful to see how Draco and Harry are still in character which makes this story all the more enjoyable. I can already tell that there is going to be a lot of sexuall tention between these two, and I think it is going to be absolutely delicious! My only complant is that your chapters are very short. I personally feel that your story could ascend from the level (wonderful) to (AWESOME), if you only would lengthen your chapter. Other then that, I cannot wait for the next installment of this story to come and hope you find the time to update as soon as you can!

If you can, please send me an e-mail letting me know when you update:
justice02908@yahoo.com

THANK YOU!
person sinheart
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i will love u forever if you update another chapter!!! your story is the one of the best Draco/Harry fics ive ever read!!
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooh, the photo shoot... :) Can't wait for that. It ought to be interesting. I think I know who's going to be dom! in this fic.. but I won't ruin it for anyone else, hehehe ;) This chapter was extra long, hence the reason I didn't read it for 2 days (I had to wait until I had enough time). but I finally did! It was good, I want you to continue. I'll be very disappointed if this never gets finished... :)
person Shardae
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Add soon....
person melissa
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see their chemistry in front of the camera....
person Wicabeth
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hope you feel better soon
person jojo
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I liked this chapter, it's kind of funny, in it's own weird way. Please update soon, can't wait to read the shoot!!!