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for Distorted Exposure

by IncessantDarkness29

person nataliebug
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved chapter seven!! you did a wonderful job! i can't wait for the nect chapter :) good luck!
person Candi
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You captured their emotions so well in this chapter! bravo!!
Could you update me when you post the next chapter?
Thanks!
person roxierose13
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow 27. i don't get that anymore. lucky you! it's cause it's a good story, hun :) I hope Harry and Draco get a little more... erm, physical interaction soon ;) So Draco pushed him (or himself) away through verbal abuse. Yeah I've had that happen to me before, okay, recently... *shrugs* sometimes it works, though I have a feeling it won't work so well for Draco, lol.

Hey, at least you're writing! I haven't written anything new for a couple weeks. When are you gonna send me that sequel? ... *eyes you suspiciously* you're not hiding it are you?? lol ;) soon? and more updates for this one, right!
person Samayel
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, those reviews are well deserved! This fics holds an elegant tension, when so many rush right to the smut. Your plot simmers constantly with resentment and veiled desire, making it a pleasure to read. Also, your efforts to re-edit and improve the quality have been noticed and are appreciated. All in all a job well done, and I'm looking forward to whatever comes next. Peace, Samayel
person Kim
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How tense! I love it, I was holding my breath just reading what Harry was doing! You've captured the tension between Harry and Draco very well. Just brilliant, I like how you're slowly developing their relationship, unlike other stories that seem to magically forget their past and instantly have them shagging each other. Haha. ^_^ Keep up the good work! =)
person angelstarfire_hikarist
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... Draco's in a bit of a self-driven rut, inn'e? *smirks* Anyway.. I want to be on that update list! *waves hand in the air like the fangirl she is* :D
person In2Deep
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice! poor harry though, he always seems to get the short end of the stick! *sniff* doesnt even get to sleep on the bed *pouts* oh well maybe he can take a nap on it or something (lol, im a bit tired right now hence the bed thing). but yea up-dates soon please!
person Amessis
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dracos right- things aren't going to be pretty for him, not at the rate he's going. He's asking for a good spanking I think. =)
person Wicabeth
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
.. Ouch ;.;


*baps Draco*
person zoe
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter hope you update again soon