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by IncessantDarkness29

person Bama
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! Finally someone writes where Draco and Harry don't immediatly fall in love or into a bed.
person snapeisthebest
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow!!! Can't wait for more!!! Please let me know when you update.


snapeisthebest@mugglenet.com
person rAiNwAtEr
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And the plot thickens. I really am a sucker for these 'love - hate' romance stories. This chapter was interesting. I like th fact that both of the boys are starting to become more aware of each other. My only suggestion is that you should have added Harry's thoughts and feelings into this chapter instead of next chapter (which I think your about to do). It would have made this chapter longer and even more interesting because the readers could compare both points of views together instead of having to flip bak to previous chapters.

Everything seems to be moving along smoothly. I wish you best of luck and hope you come out with the net chapter soon.

p.s

Thank you once again for the e-mail reminding me that you have updated, it is very helpful.
person sa
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooh loved all the tension! can we have some thoughts from harry too? the chapter was great, update soon!
person Eliztric
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Such delicious torment.

For an unbeta'd chapter, it is beautifully done, true to your form.

Eagerly awaiting your next chapter,
Eliztric
person welcome_earthling
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Draco loves it really!

I'm loving how different this story is
person Anon
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AS ALWAYS this was wonderful! i can't wait until you update again! i always get so giddy when i see that you've updated :) ahahhah. good luck!
person Rhiannon Uerch Llewelyn
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh weeping bloody hell... I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!!!!!!!

What's gonna happen now, eh?

*grovels*

Ya gotta continue!!

XD
person Elric Maxwell
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you updated! I've been on the lookout for this one! I love the tension you have them set in! I'm just waiting for them to snap! ^_^ EM
person hakkyou
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story!