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by IncessantDarkness29

person Rhiannon Uerch Llewelyn
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(Babbling incoherently, limbs like sated rubber, steam coming from incandescent ears...)

Oh---dear--------GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*dies a little death*

I would KILL TO GET THAT ROLL OF FILM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
KILL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ANYONE WOULD DO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh sweet mother of God!!!!!!!

Oooooohhhhhhh, my Lord. NOW what's gonna happen!! They share the same room!!! Ya don't just do that AFTER that & do NOTHING?!!!!!!!!! Someone's gotta be crippled the next day. Both would be good I'm sure...

*absolutely NAUGHTY smile*

I was worried for a while there but the new chapter is MUCHLY appreciated!!!!!!

Very, very, very much.

*dies again*

XD
person Kaz
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi
Thanks for another great chapter,keep going i love the story.
person Shardae
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Add soon...
person thrnbrooke
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! I've got to have chapter 13! What happens next? Does this change things?
person alyxabderson
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ACK!! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!
person Ranapuella
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW i love it! so hot!!!!!
person dannigurl
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
All I gotta say is damn. That's it because no other words can describe the delicious feeling I had after reading all 12 chapters straight. When I say I can't wait for the next chapter, I mean it. Lol I guess I did say more than damn.
person Fiona
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy,.. that was hot! best chapter yet! =)
person erotic*chaos
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
mmmm...very nice, i really liked the ending, i hope more comes sooner. i understand the busy month thing, abd i appreciate you taking the time to post this chapter, can't wait till next chapter, i love this story!
person stef
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved this chapter! wonderfully written! haha,loved the 'dominate me' look and the fact that draco couldn't get last night's harry out of his head!
Please update again soon
Stef