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by IncessantDarkness29

person arealdeal
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy moley, if that is how you write while tired and rushed for time, then I would say that that is how you should write in the future! This is a busy time of the year for everyone, I've noticed a drop in everyones updates so don't beat yourself up, just get writing, it will do you a world of good... *evil laugh*
person YamiBakura
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know, I started reading this again out of boredom, and a lack of anything good being updated, and have come to a few conclusions. One, I think it'd be smashing to see some photographs of just one or the other, in addition to the couple-shots they've been getting. And two, I'd love to see more of Harry and Alex; nothing completely serious between them, just some playful.. stuff. XD Enough to make Draco seethe with jealousy ^_~
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(Look, I logged in ^___^) No insult intended, but if you'd like a beta, I'd be more than willing to help out.
person Yanic
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely, those two need to get a room, oh wait, they have one ;)
person Snoopy
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well its starting to look good however
I'm still noticing a lot of spelling mistakes in each chapter
a tip is to copy and paste what you have written into a blank word document
then run the spell check over it to see what gets picked up
cant wait till the next chapter however so keep it comeing :D
person Rachy
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to be notified of updates, please.
person tehlibbyness
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woo~ It's getting hot~ I absolutly love the photo shoots.
person Gloria
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm positively drooling for more! Great framework, beautiful flow, flawless characterization...and the lemonishings are HOT! More, more, more!

Huggles,
Gloria
person Raven Swiftwing
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like!!! I like a lot!! I can't wait to read more. This is the best Harry/Draco I have ever read...
This story gives new meaning to "Thin line between love and hate"!
Please tell me when you update!!!
person Lady Lynn
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter, my dear. It's almost cute the way Draco doesnt want to want Harry. If you can't get to another chapter for another month thats okay as long as you keep continuing, so happy writing!