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for Distorted Exposure

by IncessantDarkness29

person Myra
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is perfect, enough said.

Fantastic job! Thank you so much for writing Distorted Exposure, definitely one of the best.

And I apologise for not reviewing the past chapters! I really really enjoyed reading it.

Take care!
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a beautiful fic. I love how in character they were. Also loved your original characters. Especially Ren, even though we didn't see a lot of them in the fic. I hope you do another long HP fic. Your writing really drew me in.
person Anon
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! I would have never thought of this! It kept me hooked the whole time. You're just bloody awesome.
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was brilliant. I love the characterizations, the conflict, the way the story focuses almost entirely on Harry and Draco. I was really hoping to see some of the reactions to the magazine, but I understand why it was done this way. Overall it was a wonderful story.
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story, every single chapter, has been fantastic. You write so well, with this perfect mix of smut and plot, and I'm awfully sad to see this finished (though equally pleased with the ending). Great job - you really are an amazing writer.
person mariahs_fantasy
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was a great story. wish i had that magazine :D
person Rook
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great. Wonderful. Just Wonderful. I love the plot, the emotional and sensually-charged photograph sessions, and the interactions, the love/hate relationship, snarls/kisses, helplessness/pride. You bridged the dichotomies rather well.

A thing I notice though is that the attraction seem to have been founded on mere sexual appeal to each other. I was waiting up until the end where the characters will see beyond the sex and look more on personalities or other qualifications. But well... I'm not saying it's anything bad. It was rather amusing how two people will end up like that with nothing to show but sexual acts. I think I was just being too romantic on hoping that there will be more sappy-mushy scenes where the least of focus is on shagging each other senseless. But that's just me.

Thanks for the story. I enjoyed every minute of it.

schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well, I'm sad that it's over, but happy that you finally finished, as I knew you would (didn't I tell you? eh? eh? eh?! *nudge nudge*) And it all ended happily, as I very much hoped it would. So don't give up on writing like I know you want to. Just wait until inspiration strikes. I know I'll be waiting :)
person Wicabeth
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*WIBBLES ALL OVER UNTIL SHE EXPLODES WITH GLEE*

HE CAME BACK!!! DRACO CAME BACK!!! =DD

*gives him a kick in the pants for waiting for so damn long though! >.< *

*snerk* This is how the actual series should have ended XD
person applesauce_N_soysauce
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT...
simply put, in the only words I can come up with @ 3am.

You did a great job with this, loved that you did this in so many chapters.
Will you be doing more in multi-chapter fics?
You're good, go with it.