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woowwww. fuck, one of the best stories I've read in a while. Me thinks some writers should read this as a model of how to avoid some of the common mistakes/pitfalls I find in stories. Like listing. Listing out the details of a persons apperance and using a lot of "-ish" in the descriptions. 'long-ish hair'. And the body being just a little tonned. Basically the art of working the details into the story properly so that the whole thing flows more and becomes so wonderfully enjoyable to read.
Buuuut maybe this is just me. And yes I know I've got a lot of spelling errors, I'm just cool and can't spell for shit like that. ^_^
But seriously, quite looking forward to the rest of the story
::squeals::

my email: misha1137@hotmail.com Please send me updates! I fucking love this story so much!!! f

Gorgeous story. The seting is amazing and the sexual elements are to die for. I'm looking forward to more, so update as soon as you can!

-Ash

Mmmm. That was incredible. Loving it.

WOW. this was a good chapter. you did a great job on it. and i'm happy that you got 70 reviews for your last chap. and i do hope you can find the time to up date soon.
please e-mail me when you have.
purple_pegacorn@msn.com

kumori

Once again, a stunning chapter. I would just like to day that I loved this chapter! The sexual tention just continues to rise and I love it! I LOVE seeing Harry as the dominate. I can't wait to see Draco get back at Harry by showing off his hot ass. Harry will be drooling over Draco's tight ass before you know it!

wow. Just wow. I have alwasy been a yaoi fan and draco harry has always been my favorite pairing, but i think that this might be the best fanfic i have ever read. I love it when they are having hatt steamy semi-ooc sex, but it is hate filled. Ooh i love the hateful ones. This is an awesome fic. Good work
=^.^=

oohhh! i love this story. and that last chap was....wow...amazing...yummy.i love it! so, when is the next update? i hope soon! i love it!

perfect title for this chapter!!!!! it was absolutely sinful!!!!!!!! yummy great work!!

Oh, my...how sexy was that?? How delicious...