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by IncessantDarkness29

person Black Padfoot
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter! uber friendliness! *wink* haha! that was great really! Would look forward to the 30th although I know how hard it is to keep to your own writing deadlines! I just don't have the patience to write the crazy thoughts in my head down fully! I have never actually completed a whole story yet! So yes, the 30th would be brilliant but no pressure! =)
Andy
person jenny
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... mind blowing really.....
person Anon
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
draco is going to kick his ass! and i can't wait. naughty harry, leaving draco all panting and wanting like that. well serves him right. well, i loved it. now get to the hard, sweaty, somewhat non-con. sex.
person Anon
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MERLIN! i can just see that picture, harry reaching out for draco, draco turning to a completely submissive harry potter (a.k.a boy who lived) ready to just be taken!!!! IT'S SO HOT
person Lioncourt
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dont you mention the word horrible in the same sentence as this fic. This was amazing!
Even though I feel sort of bad for Draco, I cant help smiling. ^^ It's really interesting how Harry turns the tables on him was soon as they're not on set.
person Kayo
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES! That was hot, this whole fic is great. I love the tension, I absolutely do! And I love chapter 13 the most....PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE tell me more are on the way. Like that chapter I mean. Do we ever get to see Harry really top Draco??? Please? With a cookie? Fantastic work.
person tehlibbyness
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Perfect! I love how Draco wants it but doesn't and then Harry, despite all his lust, still pulled away at the right moment to spite Draco and make a point. yay~
person Blackcat16
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! This story is so freakin good. Chapter 13 was hot!! I loved the way is was delivered. You HAVE to keep going. I have read a lot of Harry/Draco stories but it's hard to find a real good one like this. Keep up the GREAT work!!
person Shardae
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Add soon...
person roxierose13
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i hate you. for many reasons (none of which are valid). 70 reviews?! gah *dies* my god. well... i'm just gonna stop writing now and crawl into my little hole and try to study...

why else do i not like you? oh yeah, because of that stunt you just pulled! ha... you're learning something from me at least ;) how to write a decent cliffhanger, lmao! Although, I understand that Harry is "Potter" in this fic because it's from Draco's perspective, but it's bothering me, lol. I'd rather he be Harry.

Um... i can't really think right now. my brain is fried from finals and i've still got more. J'avais mon examen de francais aujourd'hui! yeah.. oh, and you'll be proud of me, or maybe you won't considering we don't know each other very well (we should remedy that), but I told someone.. about fanfiction... MY fanfiction. I haven't told anyone in the entire 1.5 years I've been doing this. The secrets out (at least to one person). She didn't freak out. SHe actually wanted to read some...

okay, so I need to go to bed and finish packing to go home, and study more. study study study! god,how I hate college. :)

Oh, and yeah, you need to type that thing up. If you do it soon, I could do it over the xmas break. I've got 3 weeks to do whatever the hell I want :)