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Please write more i want to see what Draco is plotting!!!!!!

*Hazy*

Oh evil author please give back the hostage chapter! your loyal readers need it..... ;)

(can't wait for the good stuff!)

please??pretty please?? with sugar?!? it was fabulous and i would love to se the new chappie...please??

I really want start off by saying how much a fan I am of your story, how pleased I am that you updated, and how interested I am in the slight twist your plot is taking. Great, great stuff. In fact, I was sketching the other day and caught myself drawing the gothic stairway scene. The first ten chapters or so of your fic really took care to paint a very clear and aesthetic background and witty, tense, and fun-to-read characters and relationships between the grand total four of them. It's what really sucked me into the story. And then, all of a sudden, we get pulled into a few chapters of smut and mild angst. Loved it, really. I thought the story was really kicking off and I was enjoying it immensely.

This past chapter has me a little concerned though. I did read your A/N and understand the need to cut the chapter in two. My concern isn't for the shortness of the chapter, really. It's the writing. It seemed very bland and almost lazy; especially when following Draco's third person. The run-on sentences and the brackets also seemed a strange shift your writing. Please understand, I'm truly a fan of the story and this is the only reason for me bringing my concerns to your review board. I trust that the rest of you story will be marvelous and cannot wait to read its continuation. I just...thought maybe you could use the constructive criticism.

Again, thanks for the update and I look forward to more.

~Gloria

P.S. Would it be possible to be notified of further updates via e-mail? My e-mail is shinigami_liason_nefie@yahoo.com Thank you in advance.

come on. SERIOUSLY. this is about the stories not the amount of reviews...

You kept me up to nearly 3am. XD Very captivating and extremely hot. :D Write more! XD

this is THE best draco/harry fanfiction i have ever read , and trust me i have read a lot of them. so please put up more chapters and do you have any idea how many chapters theres going to be? please and thankz



Destiny

You're right - chapter 15 was pointless! But i'm really enjoying your story - the whole photo-shoot thing is something I havn't read before and it's great to read something unique. How long is the story going to be be?! I'm impatient and want things to happen fast!
I like how we only really have four characters to concentrate on, as well as the animosity between our two spunks.
Looking forward to the next chapter (and all the one's after that)!
*offers chocolate to feed your inner muse and hopes it makes you right faster!*

oooh, you are sneaky! ok, so here it is: I'm really enjoying this story, (b/c it's great!) so if you could update at lets say the beginning of next week...that would be awsome! Great plot, i adore it, and love the tension right now! Can't wait to see how Draco's plan unfolds, something is bound to go awry!

PLEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSE update! p.l.e.a.s.e.
i'm sure you have enough reviews by now! everyone loves your story :D