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for Distorted Exposure

by IncessantDarkness29

person Dotowe
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! *does happy dance* That was well worth the wait. I wonder where the line between acting and the real thing was for the both of them, Malfoy included. And the added flavor of the twins watching on must've made it even more frusterating for Harry. Oh, but I'm sure Malfoy will get what's coming to him.

Can't wait for the next chapter! Happy Writing!

Joie,
Gloria
person sandra
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yet again an amazing update, but I'm beginning to wonder when are they finally going to get together if ever?

~sandra
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Need chapter 17! Draco can keep telling himself it's all for revenge. I think the twins saw the truth. I'm beginning to think there's more. Not only that but just how experienced is Harry?
person lingling
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg! I <3 it so much! <3333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333 Hurrah! Can't wait for the next part!
person RabidSqurl
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, nice job on sixteen. Aff.net keeps logging me out. It's like I have to sign in every time I try to review a story unless the author allows non-author comments. Nice to see Draco get that edge on Harry again. I love their power struggles. ^.^
person Anon
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY
best chapter ever.
good luck with the next one..although you obviously don't need it :DD
person Wicabeth
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GAH!!! The sexual tension is killing me XDDD But it's also leaving me drooling and excited for when they both get their heads out of their asses and put something much more pleasureable (for the both of them!) in there XDD
person Elric Maxwell
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was grinning from ear-to-ear when I saw this was updated! I just love how you build up the sexual tension between these two--and I think ours along with it! I'll admit, I was as frustrated as Harry was! More, please!!!! >_< EM
person Obsidian Phoenix
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've been waiting forever for your update and I must say that it was worth the wait....definately worth the wait.....I can't wait to see the repercussions of Draco's actions because I know Harry is going to retaliate....right? Update soon....this is too good.














person Jien
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
finally! someone who allows anonymous reviews! thank you thank you thank you!! (i agree some of the new updates suck). anyway, it's a good thing you allow anonymous reviews, that way you'll get lots more and also more of the 'lazy' type of reviewers like me get to cheer on you!!! UPDATE SOON!! i also need to get a new account =^.^= if this keeps up. !T_T!

cheerio, have a nice day.

-Zenith~Kaitou