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by IncessantDarkness29

person Mitamay
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that was one hell of a buildup! I swear, it's like you're the master of sexual tension, you write it so well! And the scene that came from all that was well worth the many chappies of tension! I think Harry's plan is to give him a taste, and then see if Draco will come asking for more! I really hope that's the case! So com'on, get to writing some more! EM
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17

oh, I loved it. ^____^ I was glad it was so long, and the content was hot. Update again soon.
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It better not take you too long because I want to read more now! That was just amazing!!! It was hot and raw and sexy and just... wow! You have to write more! I want more! Hahahaha. NOW!!!!!

~Kyle
person sa
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow! i didn't think they would go through with it but you definately went all out! Very hot and great to see Draco trying to fight Harry, can't wait to see their reactions to each other!
person Vittani
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can i just say FUCK that was HOT...My god u gotta update this soon. I thought i'd died and gone to heaven. wow.
person Debra
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God, That was good!
The best thing I've ever read.
person Luca
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was the most incredible smut scene I've ever read. I can't wait for the aftermath!

<3 Your fic is brilliant. I adore the pacing and the way you wrtie both Draco and Harry. Especially Draco.
person NYFanGirl
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THANK MERLIN FOR SEX!

ack, i was so happy. all the teasing had me hot & bothered and now, now with the sex out the way FINALLY, i feel at peace.

u, my child, have made me the happiest, horniest 23 yr. old in New York.
person loRi
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. So, basically I got an account to tell you how much I enjoy your stories. That was probably the best sex scene I have ever read. So, yes. Thank you for writing. I do enjoy them. :)
person ScorpioPhoenix
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeaaahhhh...they finally got busyyyy!! Whew...I was right there with them! My, my...*catching my breath* That was an excellent scene and your story is great. I've been having a great time reading it. So much sexual tension...yes, lawd!
Can't wait to see how they react now that they have crossed the line.