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by IncessantDarkness29

person Wicabeth
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*CHEERS*

XD The entire time I was reading this, I just kept chanting in my head "Take it, Draco! Take it!" XDD
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow.... that was... HOT!!!!!

Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.
person dark_Angel
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Looooooooovingggggg this piece. =) I've read part of it before, and then dropped it, and now you've got me totally hooked again. Can't wait to read more! ^__^
person alyxanderson
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was fricken amazing.
person Dotowe
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! *does happy dance* Loved it and can't want for an update! Happy writing!

~Gloria
person lingling
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg! They finally fuck! Huzzah! I loved it as always, and I can't wait for the next part.~ CHU
person MissyPadfoot
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loved it! cant wait for more!
person special_delivery
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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i applaud you immensly for that! now i must go take myself one of those beautiful nice ice-cold showers
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I **neeeed*** more!!! :o Don't end it now!!?
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
17 chapters?! It took seventeen chapters to finally get the that and yet I have a feeling that it's nowhere near over, expecialy considering they still dislike each other so much. Oh, and did you by chance notice (probably, since you are the author) That at one point, during the sex, all surnames flew out the window? Stylstic choice or mere accident? Hmm?

Yes, sorry I didn't review last chapter, I meant to read it and then got distracted so I read it along with this one, and I'm glad because I probably would have been yelling at you that they needed to GET IT ON already ;) Yikes, finally! I guess I'm not one to talk, seeing as how it's been 25 chapters in ABA and the best we've done is a bj. But don't worry.... magnificent things await. cryptic enough? Good. :D