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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I don't know if this is the first review I leave, but if it is I'm sorry. Reason is I don't like to review much cause there is not much to say, other than I love this story, you have a knack for writing in such a way that makes me feel as if I was part of it all. This is one heck of a good story, it as about EVERYTHING a yaoi H/D fan would want. As for the typos, if it had any I didn't noticed... getting in the story and actually picturing everything as if I was there it's something this story makes me do. So please continue on whenever you can! Love your work!!
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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great! the only thing i would say is that i kinda felt like i wanted to know what draco was thinking through out the whole encounter, i know you were writing from harry's perspective but...well you know! Hope you don't give up on this fic, its one of my favs, you write so well and the tension is beautifully contructed!
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm, the delicious sexual tension.. *purrs*
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a bit chilly there at the end! Sooo need chapter 20! Harry might have missed his chance!
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March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
fabulous, oh how i do hope there will be more (and that your better with updates then i am, lol)!
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March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Update soon!
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March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
There you go again with that lovely tension you bulid so well! The way you do things just leave me wanting more and more! EM
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March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 19
*melts into a steaming pile of goo* ohhh gooodddd..... XD That was HOT. And I love this story now more than ever.
*melts into a steaming pile of goo* ohhh gooodddd..... XD That was HOT. And I love this story now more than ever.
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March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Once again you grace your readers with a wonder chapter. I love how Harry is dominate in this story, I think it adds to the overall appeal. Seeing Draco suck-up his pride and allow Harry to be dominate show the hidden passion that lies dorment between the two. I hope you find the time to update!
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March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Another hot and steamy chapter... :D
I do hope that you find a bit of time to write soon. With all this delicious tension built up, it's torture waiting...
I do hope that you find a bit of time to write soon. With all this delicious tension built up, it's torture waiting...