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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mmm more more more. I can't believe Harry didn't help out. Wel i can I just wish he would have because then he could have forced Draco to listen to him. can't wait, hope to hear from you soon!
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, it's a common misunderstanding, 2 weeks always sounded to me more like a month....lol
Just kidding, I wouldn't mind waiting for a year if that is how long it took you to wrap this story up the way you want it to :D
The chapter was very good, it nailed Draco's character dead center. Can't wait for the next chapter, hoping to see Harry's pov on Draco's little... release... :)
Just kidding, I wouldn't mind waiting for a year if that is how long it took you to wrap this story up the way you want it to :D
The chapter was very good, it nailed Draco's character dead center. Can't wait for the next chapter, hoping to see Harry's pov on Draco's little... release... :)
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love this story, god I wish Draco would get over his fear and just let himself fall. I think you portray the characters so well and I can't wait for more!!
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome fic cant wait to read more please update soon !!!!
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
But of course Draco has to be a prick... he just wouldn't be Draco if he wasn't, eh? But I do hope he gets his head out of his arse quickly. lol.
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
chapter was amazing and intense like always, loved it and again am sorry its almost over. But just like with Deathly Hallows i need to know what happens at the end. Speaking of that, there were a couple of deaths i werent happy about but hey, i can write or read fan fiction where that doesnt happen so what does that matter. The story was incredible.
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter, definitely makes up for the long wait. i hope harry confronts draco, (because seriously that whole beautiful wank scene must have made it obvious to him that draco wants him bad).
i've finished DH to and it was wonderful! those lovely scenes between our two favorite boys made my inner fangirl squee!
i've finished DH to and it was wonderful! those lovely scenes between our two favorite boys made my inner fangirl squee!
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July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
When I first saw the link for this pariticular fic in anothers story (I think it's called Familiar or something like that), I honestly thought it would be alot tamer than this.
Normally I'm not a person who reads stories with vivid sex scenes, but I have to say, you've put some rather sordid fantisies into my head. The plot of this story is believeable in a way that it makes me think about how fine a line there really is between love and hate. The way you described the sets, and the tension and emotion between then was beautiful. The sex scenes make me believe I can almost feel the emotion going on around them. Ren and Alex offset Draco and Harry well, in such a way that it shows that, without Ren and Alex, they obviously wouln't have slept together at all. A part that particularly grabs my attention is Draco and Harrys' reactions to the photos and how it suddenly becomes painfully obvious to the both of them just how in deep with eachother they were. The spelling mistakes were few and far between, and even though you've had to come back and edit it a few times you really have done an amazing job. If you actually created other characters to take the place of Draco and Harry, I believe you would actually be able to get it published once you've finished writing it. I can't wait for the next few chapters to be posted. Good luck with finishing this fic, and if you ever do take up writing as a career, or already have, good luck for the future : )
Normally I'm not a person who reads stories with vivid sex scenes, but I have to say, you've put some rather sordid fantisies into my head. The plot of this story is believeable in a way that it makes me think about how fine a line there really is between love and hate. The way you described the sets, and the tension and emotion between then was beautiful. The sex scenes make me believe I can almost feel the emotion going on around them. Ren and Alex offset Draco and Harry well, in such a way that it shows that, without Ren and Alex, they obviously wouln't have slept together at all. A part that particularly grabs my attention is Draco and Harrys' reactions to the photos and how it suddenly becomes painfully obvious to the both of them just how in deep with eachother they were. The spelling mistakes were few and far between, and even though you've had to come back and edit it a few times you really have done an amazing job. If you actually created other characters to take the place of Draco and Harry, I believe you would actually be able to get it published once you've finished writing it. I can't wait for the next few chapters to be posted. Good luck with finishing this fic, and if you ever do take up writing as a career, or already have, good luck for the future : )
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! I love this story. I think it's my favorite H/D fic ever! I can't wait to see how it finishes out. I'm to the latest chapter, where they see their photos. Wonderful, wonderful story! :) Thanks so much for sharing it with us. If you have an update list, I'd love to be on it. :)
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it, love it, love it. Sorry RL has been so busy for you, but glad for my own sake that you are back. Can't wait to read the ending of this mesmerising story!