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by IncessantDarkness29

person Trish
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Looooooooooooooooooove it can't wait 4 more!
:D
person lingling
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Two more chapters? *weeps* Aw . . . Well, if you do write more stuff, I'm sure I'll read it. This fic is great, so I bet your others will be, too. I have a question or two:

1) did you plan on your fanfic to get this long, or this much hits and reviews for that matter?

2) How long is the fic? Page-wise, that is?
person amanda
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
well you've kept me up reading til 3 in the morning, although I won't argue that it was worth it. you don't need my flattery for this fic you've got enough of that, and I don't need to tell you it's the best you've ever written you know that too.

So, all I'm gonna say is we've waited patiently for other chapters in this fic so I don't care if every other reviewer kills me for saying this take your time with the next two chapters. Make them perfect, think them through and play them out in your head like you always do, until they make absolute perfect sense and you wouldn't change a thing...

Good Luck and congrats,
amanda
person Allison
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alas, another brilliant chapter. The short wait was worth it, oh yes, very worth it. And despite the lack of action, I actually thought that's what brought this chapter to a new level. The comparison between their thughts.. it was brilliant. I think everything Draco told Harry at the end was just another way of re-convincing himself as well as Harry. *pokes muse Draco* "you should be with Harry!".
Loved it and can't wait for the last two! And I look forward to any one-shots you will be writing after this:] I'm a H/D girl, so if it's another pairing, I'd probably hesitate to read it, but I'd read it anyway because you're a great author!
Good luck meeting the deadline! ^_^
person Jan
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really hope Draco stops his stupidity and start listening to his heart before it's to late.

Please update soon. ^_^
person raindrop150
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
****flails around the room miserably****
draco!!! draco!!! what the hell are you thinking!!!!! get your head out of your arse and be a man!!!! and harry!!! wtf!!!! i know you can se through an act that shallow!! slap the hell outt him and tell him how its gonna be!

oh gods. please say the next few chapters will be out soon! im out of country for the next two weeks and im gonna lose my mind cause i wanna know what happens!!! *overwhelming emotions are causing spasms*

i love it. you are the greatest for posting this and sharing. and i hope to GODS ABOVE that someone reads this and does photo manips. really really good ones!
you are my hero. i shall build you a shrine and worship you- BUT ONLY WHEN THIS IS OVER!!!!!
person bean1498
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just really love this story. I adore Draco and Harry fics that are like this. They're pretty well in character, though a little less petty because they're adults. I love that you maintained Draco's arrogance and stubbornness. I just can't enjoy a fic where Draco is all girlie and swooning as a 'bottom'. I think he'd fight it a bit, but he could enjoy it too (though he'd likely never admit it out loud). I do like it when Harry is a bit more forceful and brave, like you have him. Harry has a fairly fierce personality, even in the original books, so I can't see why that couldn't translate well into his bedroom life in adult fan fiction. Even as a 'bottom' I'm sure you could still pull that type of personality off with him. Anyway, I love this whole story and I can't wait to see how it ends. It's just wonderful. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. I adore your writing. :)
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* I love them I do but right now I want to smack them both! Sooo need chapter 24!
person ccalypso
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
person misslala
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:) Fabulous. I like how Harry pulled away. Draco's playing the "saint" so well and hiding his feelings, but that's just him. I'm really sad this is ending, but I dare to hope for a happy ending. We shall see. LOL the imagery was very nice, especially the rain against the window. It was like a metaphor for the entire chapter. :) I liked it alot.