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for Your Best Kept Secret

by EnchantedFaery

person Jen
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, if Hermione's not happy being with Harry, then why doesn't she just break up with him? From the way you've written this it appears to me that Hermione is the one that hit on Draco. And why did she date Ron then Harry? Especially if she's getting it on with Draco, why not date him since he's given up so much for her.

Basically I just wanna know what the motivations for Hermione are... cos right now seems she's a total ho-biscuit.
person Esmeralda
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cry a fucking river... I want them to be together!!!!!! sex scene = A + .... and I love the jealousy ... its so hot! Make it hurt so good!