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Hey EnchantedFaery. I had no other way of messaging you so sorry that it had to be done on here. Im the author of SerpentTongues and Lion's Tails. I just really wanted to warn you bcoz I read your review reguarding chapter 8 and if you did not like that then you are NOT gonna like the middle section of the story. It does get dark and I have put warnings up and there is a rape in later chapters. I understand why you would find the subject offensive and upsetting so I wanted to warn you that if chapter 8 was not good with you you won't like the rest of the story. it lightens up in the third part so what I can always do is tell you when that is up and hopefully there won't be too much missing, other than all the dark graphic bits that she endured during the war. Obviously though you may decide not to continue at all and thats fine. As much as I love getting readers and hearing back from them, I don't want to upset readers. I'm really sorry if you feel that the story has now been spoilt. Its a looong, on going story that I write based around a plot idea I came up with. I've read a lot of fanfics and tried to guage what was appropriate and I have read a lot of darker stuff on here that is darker than my work, but I don't know how they managed to write it. However, this story pretty much wrote itself. I'm sorry that its gone dark but it just happened and I understand that come the end of the battle at hogwarts a few ppl decided not to read on. BUT if you would like, I can post another message to you like this regarding the third part of the story. Sadly my updates aren't regular anymore as I'm juggling a disability, and several extra conditions/syndromes and am going in for surgery on weds. So I must apologise for that. I hope you won't me mad or offended by this message. I just didn't want you to read on and get upset by it.

Thank you so much for the support and reviews.
B xxx

good story.
liked everyones povs

It was fabulous! I'm a huge Hr/D shipper, this was most definately pleasing. I hope, one day, that Hermione, even if she still IS with Scarhead, can tell Draco she loves him. Keep it up!

~Alina

Well, if that wasn't a lovely little bit of angsty smut!! Though I typically don't read het fiction, you do it well. =) I did see a few run on sentences that could have been separated by either a semi-colon or period, but I didn't think it detracted too much from the story. I also saw one other thing that most people probably wouldn't even notice. Honestly, I only noticed it because it's a personal writing pet peeve (meaning I used to do it in every single thing I wrote and if I go back and read it now I cringe lol). "Towards" should actually be 'toward' to be proper, but since the vast majority of us actually say "towards", it's often missed as being improper. I would love it if you'd let me know when the third part comes out. I can't wait to see how it all ends!! Once more, good job!

loved it that was so awesome

Great as always, i always wonder where authors such as you get there inspiration. You're really talented your imagery alone is enough to make someone melt. Awesome work!

Julia

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

great story, great imagery, i loved the '1st person' effect it really made the story.

Can't wait for the sequels.

Julia!

ok you said it might not be as good well there arent as many details but still its good and the details are just fine:) i kinda love the fact that harry knows hermione is cheating and hes doing the same thing its kinda wierd but its also cool i love it(and my bf liked the first one too;)

OMG I LOVED THIS!!!!! IT MAKES ME WANT TO FUCK MY BF ON THE SPOT AND IT TAKES A LOT TO DO THAT!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE THIS FAST!!! I WANT MORE AND PLEASEMAKEIT LONGER THAN 3 PARTS?!?! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH YOU HAVE NO IDEA IT IS SO AROUSING YOU SHOULD TRY TO PUBLISH THIS KIND OF STUFF BUT WITH DIFFERENET CHARACTERS I WOULD BUY EVERY BOOK YOU WRITE IF IT WAS LIKE THIS!!!