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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow great chapter ... i cant wait to read how mione act whrn she finds out the truth .. please please please please please please please please please update soon .. later for now
angel
angel
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeah they have ron now.... istill hope they can snap mione out of it .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now
angel
angel
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story but i have one minor niggle, please could you correct the spelling of raped, the way you're spelling it is driving me nuts, (sorry i know it's very minor, but ir's spoiling an otherwise eccelent story for me.
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is beyond chaotic. You really need to polish it up.
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If I see the word "rapped" one more time, I'm gonna scream. Aside from that there is too much dialogue...and its really tedious having to read the same information over and over again.
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to reading Ron's reaction to the letter. Sneaky Severus!
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man is he going to be pissed ..... i hope someone can brake the charms so she can remember everything .... please please please please pelase update soon i would love to read more .. later for now
angel
angel
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chapter9 is not here only the notes and name are.
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Raped -- not rapped
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man poor mione .. i hope sev and the other can help her out and find out that ron is doing all these bad things... please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ...later for now
angel
angel