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August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting turn on most of the fanfiction.
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like the way this is going, but one thing is confusing me. Hermione sent an owl home to her parents about the baby, i thought her parents were killed?
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March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, your story concept isn't bad, but there's very slow developement. You write alot about the physical events, but shortly state the mental changes. Hopefully you'll be able to edit in some emotional development.
Also, a small thing that was bothering me.
You spell the word raped "rapped". So every time I read "Snape rapped" I giggle, which I'm sure wasn't your intent. This is a good rough draft, but needs a little bit of work. Maybe a beta would help?
Also, a small thing that was bothering me.
You spell the word raped "rapped". So every time I read "Snape rapped" I giggle, which I'm sure wasn't your intent. This is a good rough draft, but needs a little bit of work. Maybe a beta would help?
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man i hope he talk to her soon .. hmm how will everyone take the news about ron's death ... please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A good story, I will be waiting for more to be released.
If you are still looking for someone to beta read, I could do it for you. Just let me know.
If you are still looking for someone to beta read, I could do it for you. Just let me know.
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So...my question ( and I checked the other reviews first incase it had been covered..) Is Severus a werewolf or not?????? the first chapter ends with that tidbit, then a while later Remus arrives for "his" wolfsbane potion, but no mention of Snape needing it? Your doing good, you can do better, but remember, all us poor muggles who can't write a plot outline for a beer commercial, are enjoying the read!
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man .. who is the new spy ... please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now
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