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for Daddy Dearest - (No Update, Edit)

by Ms_Figg

person Kaoz Of Slytherin
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok so I purposely waited until I reached the end of this story to review. I absolutely LOVED this story! I started reading it 3 days ago, and EVERY spare moment that I had was dedicated to reading this story. You have shocked and awed me with both the plot and the sheer talent that you pored into this story. I loved the references of some of your older stories that were splashed throughout Daddy Dearest, and how you introduced new characters (like Jasmine and Andreas- both of which I love) realistically. I have read quite a few of your other fics and there is no doubt in my mind that this fic is your best, and is my favorite!
Kaoz of Slytherin
P.S. I loved you
person Brian
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are an amazing writer. This story was amazing, you really did a great job.
You kept everything moving along and it stayed interesting and enjoyable through the entire story.

Brian
person Jen618
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story so far! I love Matthias' attitude. I'm surprised he doesn't get on with the young Potter, since they would have been close while being brought up, but I guess that gets explained later. You are always thorough!
person Jen618
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter. Thus far, this is my fav of your stories, hands down. Your experience of kids really shows, you got the mannerisms down.
person Jen618
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Severus! A nice pensieve memory. I loved the levels, too!
person Jen618
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Jasmine and the pink ink is just LOL. And Justice... hmm. Does he get justice???
person Jen618
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I had something to say here at ch 27 but AFF were down for backup. Sigh. I think I was going to say that is was funny and well done. Also that you've written Matthias v well -- he doesn't sound like an adult instead of a kid. He actually sounds like a smart kid. Well, I'm on 37 now and it's killing me... a million more to go.
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I read the whole thing in one sitting and I have to say it is one of the best fics I have read on here for a while (Also the longest)It was so good that I couldn't step away from the computer for very long. It kept me very interested. Great Job!!!
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG. This has been my favorite story EVER. It should be published as a book! (((LOVED the Andreas lemon! ::wink:: LOL.)
Kelly
person Ms_Figg
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi howdy. In this alternate universe, I had Albus clear Severus to be able to apparate on to the grounds of Hogwarts because of the condition he would be in sometimes when he would come from the Dark Lord. If he couldn't he could have died outside the gates, since no one knew when he would return. Although Voldemort no longer tortures him as much as he used to, Severus still has this ability.