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for Daddy Dearest - (No Update, Edit)

by Ms_Figg

person smmz79
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow a game of hide and go get how hot... i love a pursuing severus what great foreplay it gets her nerves on end and it makes him way more erotic...
person smmz79
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG that is ssoooooo funny i love this it is a new spin and i like the way that you are heading with it ..... omg i laughed sooo hard when mathias asked severus to christmas dinner
person smmz79
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was hot well you are starting them on the decent into lemons.... very good and you are getting severus to a point with mathius that he needs to be.... 'sexy, big nose and all...'
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW WOW Ms_Figg I LOVED IT AND LOVE IT! I HAVE NEVER EVER EVER SEEN SUCH A LONG STORY EVER BEFORE AND I HAVE NEVER EVER SEEN SUCH A WELL EXCELLENT WRITTEN STORY BEFORE EVER AND TRUST ME I HAVE READ MANY MANY STORIES AND NOTHING COMPARES TO THIS WELL WRITTEN EXCELLENT STORY! WELL DONE WELL DONE MY FRIEND!
EXELLENT BRILLIAN STORY!
IT HAD EVERYTHING THAT A STORY SHOULD HAVE IN IT AND MORE
AND IT MADE YOU WANT TO GO BACK FOR MORE!

CONGRATS MY DEAR FRIEND!
BRAVO MY DEAR FRINED! :-)

LOVE FROM ALANRICKMANFAN21 XX XX

PS WILL THERE BE A SEQUEL TO THIS STORY DADDY DEAREST - (NO UPDATE, EDIT) AND IF THERE IS WHAT WILL THE SEQUEL BE CALLED AND WHEN WILL U WRITE IT AND POST IT? SOON? I HOPE SO! WELL DONE!
person neelix
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! It has taken me 2 days, 5 cups of coffee and a bottle of red wine to get through this. my house is a mess, I have a pile of ironing and I forgot to feed the cat... but I couldn't tear myself away. This is the finest bit of fan fiction I have ever read, so well written and so well crafted.... just fantastic.

It was so worth the hangover!

Thankyou!
person Loussi
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutly fantastic, wondergul, original, Severus was so IC and i loved how the sons personality seemed to match his father, the snarkiness and all the smirking *meltdown* great fic, and great SEX ED ^_^
Thanks for sharing.
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
heheheh. i think severus is warming up to the idea of having a son. take that seviepoo. ^-^
person Anon
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Selina
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, excellent story.
Longest story I have ever read, and I think you did a damn fine job of it!!
Actually, all your stroies are great. Now I am going to read ' Walking the Gre Line '

Thank you for the enjoyment
Sel
person kitsune kiras
schedule July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow i love this story!!! i love your work! WONDERFUL!!!