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for Daddy Dearest - (No Update, Edit)

by Ms_Figg

person Queeny
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The plot thickens!!
person Queeny
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahaha. Here's the Jaw's theme music as Severus circles up behind Hermione..
person Queeny
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Severus seems rather open with Hermione.
person Queeny
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Urgh. The Wizarding world sounds horrible right now!
OH !! In the Severus Bang's series totally loved how Voldemort died. Curious on how he will die in this story [if he does]
person Queeny
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I kinda like Jasmine.. but wish she wasn't so Malfoyish. :/
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooo! Great story so far! I cant wait for the next chapter to see how he reacts.
person Stratyllis
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your blurb says this story is complete, but it doesn''t seem to have an ending. Are there supposed to only be six chapters?

What you have up is really good. I hope this isn't the end, I want more.
person Ms_Figg
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thia story is huge, believe me. I am going to put up several chapters a day until it is completely uploaded. But it is completed on my own website, the Burning Pen at http://www.theburningpen.com and you can read it in entirety there if you like. :)
person Karen
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this a lot so far. Poor Justice. Mathias hexing everyone in sight is especially funny. And his characterization seems quite good--protective and loving of Mom, but doesn't want to be embarassed by her etc. Why is the story listed as complete?
person Ms_Figg
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am uploading chapters a few at a time since the story is so long. Please see the note on chapter six or the message above for more details.