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for Daddy Dearest - (No Update, Edit)

by Ms_Figg

person Queen Celestia
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Owch.
person Annika Lee
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just love it! You did an excellent job with the story and the characters. Mathias Granger is such a well-formed character. I noticed that the summary said "Completed". Will there be a sequel? I do hope so. I want to know what will happen to the other characters ---> Jasmine Malfoy, Andreas Mbutu and of course James Potter. :-)
person Queen Celestia
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Arrgh.
person Queen Celestia
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Total love for Andreas!
person Queen Celestia
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Poppy. :x
person Queen Celestia
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brrrr evil Malfoy's!
person Queen Celestia
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well at least Mathias knows what's what now. Well.. most of it.
person dryade
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Great story! Read it in one sitting. ;) I can't wait to see what change the boy will see in people.
person Donavon.
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was enjoying this story, then about two weeks ago, I read the update thinking the story was complete and left the story feeling confused. Have just read another 20 chapters. Brilliant chapters which I thoroughly enjoyed, well except for Draco's daughter, she annoys me as much as prat Draco used to. So why is your summary showing completed? Could you alter it please.

I know he beat the dark and survived to meet his ancestors, but, Mathias states that he knows he is going to do great things...is he going to help defeat Voldemort and his politically correct party? Well I'll wait and see and just continue to watch for updates even if completed is still showing. Best wishes with thanks for your great stories.
person Donavon.
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really good chapters. I now feel sorry for Jasmine hopefully she will keep to the light and help her friends Mathias and Andreas, I like the way the story really flows. Look forward to the next update. Best wishes.