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by roozie

schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Wow. Wow. *lol* That's all I need to say about your stories cuz they're all amazing. And this particular story is probably the hottest smut with smart plot you've ever written. ;)
person JW
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 17 - I'm glad Lucius is at least thinking of Draco here, as it doesn't sound as if Draco and Hermione would ever be truly in love and happy with each other. Lucius is just going to have to find a way out of his marriage to Narcissa - maybe Hermione could help, research legal loopholes if Lucius can't get the law changed. Thanks for updating!
person BuckyKattGirl
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yummmmm! More please!
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person DaniD
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just have to say that this is currently one of the best Lucius/Hermione fics being written! Wow..It's got it all...The sex scenes are beyond hot and well written, but even more than that, it is really a wonderful love story. Bravo! ;D
person pinkwands
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that chapter was so damn hot! I totally adore where you are taking this story, it is so much more than a PwP :D you are so clever!! I really like how he felt remorseful for degrading her, he really does love her..too bad Narcissa can't kick the bucket some how lol
person Citten
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow! that was really great! i really liked the part were victor slapped hermoine, it really blew me away yet it was really a great opening and him also being caugh with narcessia. it also made the good opening with the proposal with her marrying draco, so now what will happen?
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
god please update soon i loved it.
person BuckyKattGirl
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, luuuuuuve the hot sex but haaaaate the whole marrying Draco thing! Must fix this and think of another plan, please!
person JW
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 16 - sorry, still not happy with the idea of Lucius arranging for Draco-Hermione to get married so that Lucius can shag Hermione and be unfaithful to Draco. If "Draco has always had feelings for (Hermione), a secret crush since childhood," Draco would be devastated to marry Hermione only to find out that she's shagging his own father - that Hermione never loved Draco, only Lucius. Draco hasn't done anything to deserve this treatment - unfaithfulness by Pansy OR Hermione. Isn't anyone besides me thinking about Draco?