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Ch 20 - I'm glad she told Draco the whole truth. So, he says, "I can't promise to understand or condone your affair with my father once we're married

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Good chapter... I'm not angry or going to flame you. Unless by some miracle, Lucius is suddenly a free and single wizard, then, Draco is simply the best choice. I like it very much, and I am eagerly waiting for more! Soon, please?

Shiloh

Ok (grimacing as I steadfastly refrain from flaming)! I'm holding my fire for now but please get to the good stuff, Woman!

ouch! she's not going to tell lucius that could be bad, really bad! most people can't keep secrets like that well for very long anyways. this will be interesting. and how will lucius deal with all of this when he does find out! questions, questions, questions. some i do hope will be answered very soon in your next update!

Wow..The plot thickens considerabley! First of all..I know that Lucius' hands are tied because of his marriage to Narcissa..but...I soo want him to know that Hermione is having his baby! lol I am beginning to really love Draco though. He is willing to marry Hermione despite her affair with Lucius and the baby. I know he stands to gain by marrying Hermione just because of who she is..but WoW..Will Hermione begin a love affair with him? Though Lucius thought of pairing Hermione and Draco..will he be able to handle his jealousy? This is getting complicated! (whisper) Psssst..How bout ya just kill off Narcissa?? lol Would solve alot of problems..

awwww that was a short but sweet chappie. I love it. no flames here. Draco has certainly changed and it is so nice and sweet that he's willing to look after his father's baby. and even marry Hermione. I mean i kinda knew or maybe more or less hoped it was coming. A kind and caring Draco. I really like him that way. it shows the depth of his character. I feel bad for Hermione but in a way she got herself in it. and using Draco is a bit mean but as along as he wants it hey and maybe they can be good for each other and learn to care. I wonder though if that will be the end of Lucius and Hermione's affair? omg Update soon please and thanks for updating again so fast. Keep up the good work.

omg poor Lucius. and this chappie was nice. scarey at first cause i thought oh no Lucius dies but he didn't. thnk god Obereon was there. and I can see lil seeds forming in Hermione's head. Marrying Draco and telling him the childs his possibly? Does Draco know for sure they are togther or does he just have suspicions? hmm I wonder. anyways good chappie Keep up the good work.

that was spectular! it made my heart stop, i really want to cry. what are they now going to do? i do hope that you make an update soon! :)

ohhhhhh noooo I want Lucius to find out about the baby!!! loved this chapter, it warms my heart how much Lucius loves hermione :D