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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it. When will Lucius find out the baby is his?
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the plot overall. What hinders me, though, is the punctuation and other little such errors.
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 21 - wicked cliffy! Lucius wakes up, but how much has he heard... So Draco and Hermione haven't had sex yet? Is Cissa still shagging Viktor? Thanks for updating!
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay this is very great story and i am falling in love with how every thing is working out and i really wish i know where you were going but it also makes it that much more fun! update soon please!
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH! I can not wait to see what happens!
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
im glad narcissa was ok with mione marring draco .. im happy that lucius is up now ... i hope he is happy that mione is with child and married to draco but will he know in some why that the child that mione is carring is he .... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwww that was a sweet chappie. Poor Hermione she seems all alone. thank god Lucius finally awoke.. man a cliffie though. I cannot wait to see what happens. I wonder if hre heard her the whole time cause even people in comas can sometiems know all along what's been going on around them. it will be exciting to see. Keep up the good work.
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhh *jumps around* I can't wait to see Lucius's reaction!!! great chappie!
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great i love it .. i hope luicus gets better .. and will he find out the truth about mione's baby.. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! You are a terrible tease! I feel frustrated... I wanted so to hear what Lucius had to say and you ended it... :-[ PLEASE!!!! Update soon!!!